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Consider using these shorter, simpler alternatives to bureaucratic, overstated and pompous words. Note that several
simple words may be clearer than a single long word. Sorry about the green background in the table! Something went wrong in the HTML coding.
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access (as a verb) |
get, reach |
accommodate |
fit, hold, adapt, house, adjust, help, grant, allow |
accommodation, accommodations |
home, house, room, homes, houses, rooms |
accompany, accompanying |
go with, escort, with, attend, belong to |
accomplish |
do, achieve, perform, succeed, carry out |
accordingly |
so |
acquire |
get, buy, win, gain, earn, pick up |
additionally |
and, also |
(an) additional |
more, added, other, extra, another |
adequate (number of) |
enough, satisfactory, acceptable |
adjust, adjustment |
change |
advise |
tell, recommend |
afford |
give |
alter, alteration |
change |
alternative |
other |
ameliorate |
make better, improve |
analogous |
similar |
anticipate |
expect |
append |
attach, add |
apprise |
tell, advise |
appropriate (as an adjective) |
proper, right, fitting, suitable, apt, correct |
(for) approximately |
about, roughly, almost, around, close to, nearly, or so |
ascertain |
check, be sure, find out, discover, learn |
assist; assistance |
help, aid, back, relieve; help, aid, backing, support, relief |
attain |
reach, succeed, meet, gain, get, win, arrive at, grasp |
attempt (as a verb) |
try, take on |
attired |
dressed, dressed, clothed |
augment |
increase, make larger |
basically |
Delete or use mainly, most, mostly, chiefly, largely |
biannually |
twice a year |
bimonthly , biweekly |
every two months, every other month; every two weeks, every other week |
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category |
group |
cease |
end, stop, finish |
cognizant |
aware, knowing |
commence |
begin, start, open |
commencement |
beginning, start |
communicate |
write, talk |
compensation |
pay, payment |
complete |
finish |
component, components |
part, parts, ingredient, item, unit |
comprise |
consist of, contain |
conceal |
hide, cloak, cover, disguise, mask, shelter, veil |
concept |
idea |
concerning |
about, on, for, as for, in, of, over, to, toward, with |
consequence |
result, effect, outcome, importance, note, weight |
consequently |
so, thus |
consolidate |
combine, join |
constitute |
make up, be, compose, form, set up, frame |
construct |
build, make, erect, set up, compose, form, frame, model |
container |
bottle, jar, package |
cooperate |
help |
currently |
now, today, (just) yet or delete |
customary |
usual, ordinary, normal, routine, regular |
deem |
consider, think, treat as, believe, judge, view |
delete |
cut, drop |
demise |
death |
demonstrate |
show, prove, display, explain, teach, march |
denote |
show, say, mark, note, mean, stand for |
depart |
leave, go |
designate |
appoint, set, name, label, choose, earmark, show |
desire |
need, want, wish |
desist |
stop, suspend, end, give up |
detain |
hold |
determine |
figure out, learn, find out, fit, decide, settle, end, control, fix, discover |
diminutive |
small, tiny, little |
disseminate |
send out, spread, scatter |
donate |
give, grant, present |
duplicate (as a verb) |
copy, double, repeal, multiply |
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effectuate |
carry out, bring about, achieve, realize, cause |
e.g. (exempli gratia) |
for example |
eliminate |
cut, drop, end, get rid of, remove, erase, expel, cancel, cut out |
employ (an instrument or tool) |
use |
encounter (as a verb) |
meet, run into, face |
endeavor (as a verb) |
try, carry out |
enumerate |
list, name, count, number |
et al. (et alibi, et alii) |
and others, and elsewhere |
etc. (et cetera) |
and others, and the like, and the rest |
evince |
show, reveal |
expedite |
hasten, speed up, hurry |
expend |
spend, use, pay |
expenditure |
expense, cost, spending, outlay, charge, payment |
expiration |
end, close, finish, death |
facilitate |
help, ease, make easy, make easier, simplify, promote |
facility |
base, building, factory, laboratory, office, plant, warehouse (be specific or omit) |
factor |
part, fact, feature, condition, circumstances, reason, cause (be specific or omit) |
feasible |
possible, probable, likely |
feedback |
comments, response, opinions |
finalize |
finish, end, complete, settle, wrap up |
following (as a preposition) |
after |
formulate |
devise, develop, form, make, work out, draw up, draft, frame, create, express, plan |
forward (as a verb) |
send |
fundamental |
basic |
furnish |
give, send, provide, supply, equip |
hence |
so, from now, from here |
henceforth |
from now on, from now |
hereafter; herein, herewith; heretofore |
from now on or later for hereafter; here is (are), with this or in this for
herein and herewith; up to now, earlier, before or until now for heretofore |
hosted |
gave, is host to, entertained |
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i.e. (id est) |
that is |
impact (as a verb) |
affect, influence |
implement |
carry out, achieve, do, follow, fulfill, make, produce, put in place, put into use, realize, set, set up,
complete, impose (as a verb); tool, instrument (as a noun) |
inception |
beginning, start, birth |
incombustible |
fireproof |
indicate |
say, show, suggest, feel, hint, mention, point at, tell, mark, signal, point out, point to,
read |
indication |
sign, signal, mark, hint, suggestion |
individual, individuals |
person, people, man, men, woman, women, anyone, everyone, someone |
inform |
tell |
initiate |
begin, introduce, open, start, cause, launch, set up, introduce, admit |
input, output, throughput |
information; input: advice, clout, comments, effort, ideas, opinions, thoughts, views;
output: work, product, byproduct, result; throughput: material |
inquire (about) |
ask |
institute (as a verb) |
begin, start, set up, introduce, create, found |
interface |
interact, meet, collaborate, work together, link,contact |
locality, location |
area, city, district, locale, place, point, site, spot, town, zone, neighborhood |
magnitude |
size, extent, importance, greatness |
manner |
way |
materialize |
appear, develop, happen, occur, turn up, come about |
maximum |
most, largest, greatest |
methodology |
methods, principles, procedure |
minuscule |
tiny |
mitigate |
moderate, ease, soften, relieve, reduce |
modify, modifications |
change, vary, adapt, adjust; changes, variations, adjustments |
monies, moneys |
funds, money, cash |
moreover |
besides, also |
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necessitate |
require, demand, exact, must, need, force, compel, make, call, call for |
necessity |
need |
nevertheless |
anyhow, but, even so, however, still, yet |
notification |
notice, warning, advice, announcement |
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despite, although, even if, however |
numerous |
many, countless, endless, several, untold (or be more specific) |
objective |
aim, goal |
obligated |
bound, compelled |
obligation |
debt, duty, bond, contract, tie, favor |
observe |
see, watch, note, view, follow, keep, obey, remark |
obtain |
get, earn, gain, buy, exist, hold, stand |
obviate |
avoid |
ongoing |
continuing, under way, active, constant, advancing, current, growing, endless, lasting |
operate |
use, work, run, perform, act, go, handle, manage, cause, keep |
operational |
active, live, running, working |
optimal, optimum |
best, ideal, model, greatest, most, peak |
orientate |
orient |
overall |
total, complete, general |
paradigm |
pattern, example, model |
parameter |
limit, boundary, guideline, extent, perimeter--or properties, conditions, characteristics,
feature |
permit |
let, allow |
peruse |
read with care, review, study, examine, inspect |
place (as a verb) |
put |
portion |
part |
possess |
have, own, control, hold, take, take over |
possibility |
chance |
preplan, preplanning |
plan, planning |
present (as a verb) |
give, introduce, show |
presently |
in a little while, in a short time, shortly, soon |
preserve |
keep |
preventative |
preventive |
previous |
earlier |
previously |
before, earlier |
principal |
main, chief |
prior |
earlier |
prioritize |
arrange, list, order, rank, rate, set priorities |
proceed |
go, go ahead, continue, go on, move, run, walk, advance |
procure |
get, buy, gain, win, find |
provide (with) |
give |
purchase (as a verb) |
buy |
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receive |
accept, get |
regard, regarding |
about, on, for, as for, in, of, over, to, toward, with |
relate (to) |
say, show, tell |
remain |
stay |
remainder |
rest, remains, excess, surplus, balance |
remove |
take away, haul away |
remunerate |
pay |
render |
make, give, deliver, hand over, present, send in, pay, show |
reoccur |
recur |
represents |
is |
reproduce |
copy |
request (as a verb) |
ask, seek, question |
reside |
live, stay, remain |
residences |
homes, houses, addresses |
retain |
keep, hold, save |
secure |
get |
select |
choose, pick |
semiannually |
twice a year |
shall |
will, must |
solely |
only |
state |
say |
strategize |
plan |
subsequently |
later, afterward, then, after, next, since |
subsequent (to) |
later, after, afterward, next, since, then, following, resulting |
substantiate |
back up, confirm, prove, support, verify |
summon |
send for, call, call up, call on |
supplement |
add to |
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terminate |
end, stop, cancel, finish, fire, halt, close, wind up, limit |
therefore |
so, then, thus |
thus |
so |
transmit |
send, broadcast, relay, transfer, pass on, bear, carry |
transpire |
happen, occur, take place, leak out |
ultimate |
last, final, crowning, perfect, supreme, eventual |
upon |
on |
utilize |
use |
use up |
use |
virtually |
almost |
vis-a-vis |
about, compared with, opposite |
whether |
if |
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