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Consider using these simpler, concise alternatives to
bureaucratic, wordy phrases.
Instead of ...
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Change to or try ...
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adequate number (of) |
enough |
adjacent to |
close to, near, next to, beside, by |
afford an opportunity |
allow, give, let |
ahead of schedule |
early, too soon |
all of (the); all of (us) |
all (the); (we) all |
almost all |
most |
along the lines of |
close to, like, resembling, similar to, such as |
an estimated |
about, almost, around, close to, more than, nearly, or so,
roughly |
arrange to return |
return |
arrived at (an agreement, a compromise, a conclusion, a
decision, an estimate) |
agreed, compromised, concluded, decided, estimated
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as a consequence, as a result |
so, then, thus |
as a consequence of, as a result of |
because, because of, from, since |
as a means of |
to |
as long as |
if, since |
as of now |
about |
as regards |
about, as for, for, in, of, on, over,
respecting, to, toward, with |
assuming that |
if |
as to |
on, for, about, of, by, from, in, over, to, with (or
leave out) |
as well as |
and, also |
at all times |
always |
at present, at
the present time, at this point in time, at this time |
now, today |
attached herewith is |
here's |
at the end of |
after |
at the time (that) |
when |
because of the fact
that |
because, since |
by (the) means of |
by, with, from, in, over, through |
by reason of |
because, because of, since |
by the name of |
named, called |
by virtue of |
by, because of, under |
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call a halt (stop) to, call an end to |
halt, stop, end |
came to an agreement |
agreed |
carry out an evaluation of |
evaluate |
center around |
at, center on, in, on, revolve around |
come to an agreement |
agree, compromise, decide, resolve, settle |
come to an end |
close, end, finish, halt, stop |
comply with |
follow, obey |
conduct an investigation |
investigate or find out, study, explore, examine,
research, search, look into |
conduct a review of |
review |
conduct experiments |
experiment |
contiguous to |
next to, adjoining, touching |
course of |
during, while, in, at |
desirous of |
use a form of want |
despite the fact that
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although, even though, despite |
draw attention to |
announce, mention, point out, point to, promote, publicize,
reveal, show, tell, unveil |
due to the fact that |
because, because of, since, for, as |
during such time, during the
course of, during the period from, during the time |
while, during, for, in, over, throughout, when, with
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effect many changes
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change |
employment opportunities |
jobs |
except when |
unless |
excessive number (of) |
too many |
extend an invitation |
invite |
for the purpose of
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to, for, of |
for the reason that
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because, since, for, given |
from the point of view of |
from, for |
give and take |
compromise, concession, exchange, discussion |
give an indication of |
show |
give rise to |
cause, lead to, result in |
give consideration to |
consider |
has (had) occasion to be |
is (was) |
has no |
lacks |
has the ability to, has the capability |
can |
have an effect on |
affect, influence |
hold a conference, hold a
meeting |
confer, meet |
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if that (this) is not the case |
if not |
if that (this) is the case |
if so |
implement an investigation of |
investigate or find out, study, explore, examine,
research, search, look into |
in addition |
also, and, as well, besides, further, then, too |
in addition to |
besides, and, beyond, as well as, also
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in advance of |
ahead of, before, by |
in an effort to |
to |
inasmuch as |
because, since, as, as far as |
in back of |
behind |
in conjunction with
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along with, and, combined with, coupled with, joined with,
paired with, with |
in connection with
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with, about, for, of, in, on, over |
in excess of |
more than |
in favor of |
for |
in lieu of |
for, instead of |
in most (many) cases, in most
(many) instances |
almost always, commonly, many, most, mostly,
most of, most often, most of these, much, nearly all, nearly always, normally,
often, typically, usually |
in order to |
to, for |
in (the) past (days, months, weeks, years) |
before, earlier |
in place of |
for |
in (the) possession of |
has, have |
in proximity to |
close to, near |
(be) in receipt of |
have, received |
in reference to |
about, on, for, as for, in, of, over,
respecting, to, toward, with |
in regard to, in relation
to |
about, on, for, as for, in, of, over, respecting, to,
toward, with |
in respect of |
about, as for, for, in, of, on, over, respecting, to,
toward, with |
in spite of |
after all, apart, aside, despite, even with, for all, with
all, although |
in terms of |
in, for, about, as, as for, by, of, on, respecting, through,
under, with |
in the absence of |
without |
in the amount of |
for, of |
in the case of |
in, with, if, by, for (or delete) |
in the context of
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in, about, for, of |
in the course of |
during, at, for, in, over, throughout, when,
while, with |
in the event that
(of) |
if, should |
in the nature of |
like, about |
in the neighborhood
of |
about, roughly |
in the (very) near
future |
soon, before long, in a week (month), next month (year),
shortly, this month (year), tomorrow |
in the vicinity of
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close to, near, about, close by, in, nearby,
around, round, close |
in view of the fact |
because, since, for, given, when |
is able to |
can |
it would appear that |
apparently |
it is probable that
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probably |
limited number (of)
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a couple, a few, little, meager, not many, one or two (two
or three), scant, only so many, some, spare, sparse |
made a statement |
said |
make an application |
apply |
make an examination of |
examine |
make reference to |
refer to |
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none at all |
none |
not in a position to |
unable to, cannot |
not many |
few |
not in a position to |
unable to, cannot |
not old enough |
too young |
not possible |
impossible |
not the same |
different |
notwithstanding the fact that |
although, but, even though, still, though, yet |
of major importance
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is important, are important, was important |
on a daily basis, on a regular basis
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daily, every other day, hour, monthly, regularly, twice a
month, twice a week |
on behalf of |
for, backed, supported |
one of the |
a, an, one |
on most occasions |
usually |
on the basis of |
by, from, because of, assuming, based on, from |
on the part of |
by, among, for, from, in, of |
opt for |
choose |
over the duration of |
during, for, in, over, throughout, when, while, with
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per annum |
a year, yearly, for each year |
per diem |
daily, daily allowance, a day, for each day
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perform an assessment of |
assess |
present time |
present, now |
previous to, prior to |
before |
provided (providing) that |
if |
pursuant to |
under, by, following |
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realize a savings of |
save |
refer to as |
call, name, term |
regards to, as regards,
with regard to |
about, as for, for, in, of, on,
over, respecting, to, toward, with |
relating to |
about, as for, for, in, of, on, over, to, toward, with
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result in |
lead to |
some of the |
some |
spell out |
explain, specify, describe, detail |
state with confidence
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use a form of be confident |
submit an application for |
apply for |
subsequent to |
after, afterward, later, next, since, then,
following |
sufficient number (of)
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enough |
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take action |
act |
the question as to whether |
the question whether |
this office |
we, us |
time frame, time period
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time, period, age, era, interval |
to a certain degree
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in a sense, in part, less often, less so,
partially, some |
to whatever extent
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however |
under the provisions
of |
under, of |
until such time (point)
as |
until |
use up |
use |
with a view to |
to, for |
with reference to
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about, on, for, as for, in, of, over, respecting, to,
toward, with (or leave out) |
with regard to |
about, on, for, as for, in, of, over,
respecting, to, toward, with (or leave out) |
with respect to |
about, on, for, with |
with the exception
of |
except for |
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